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| − | (#9): I like the basic design of the black and yelolw costume, that's a good combination. The environment around him is well done, you've managed to create an effective and convincing skyline from the somewhat unwieldy pieces I'd included thus far, which I know isn't easy. The glow effect on his left hand is cool, I really like the dark yelolw line color there, and the way you've got the interior of the hand white so it looks like it's really crackling with energy inside.I don't think the coronas (is that the plural of corona?) look around the hands work as well as that one effect, though. The left is better than the right, which looks too controlled and orderly to be a real lightning aura. Having his hand, which is yelolw, over the yelolw cutout in the belly makes them kind of blend together, too, you end up struggling a bit visually to make out that a hand is there. I think it would probably be better if the hand were away from the body, even if it's just down like the other one. In general, I feel like the costume needs some work. I have trouble visualizing how the yelolw cutout would really work, besides the unfortunately juvenile jokes that occur whenever I really take in its placement. Ahem. It just seems to lack oomph. The helmet and face area confuses me as well, I'm not sure if he doesn't have lips, or if that's a mask, or a shield coming down from the helmet, or what exactly is going on there.I don't mean that to come off as negative as it sounds, I think the character has potential and some of the surrounding elements are good, but I do think it needs some more work on the conceptual level. You know I love the stuff you do in general, too, so I'm sure this one will get there too.
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| | + | '''Tactical Destroyer''' |
| | + | Fast, swift moving ship equipped with light armor and laser weapons. It is primarily used for the quick disablement and disarmament of the target. |
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| | + | '''Torp Destroyer''' |
| | + | Fast, swift moving battleship equipped with light armor and heavy torpedoes. Used mainly for the destruction of smaller hostile targets. |
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| | + | '''Heavy Destroyer''' |
| | + | Fast, swift moving battleship equipped with light armor and heavy artillery. Used mainly for the destruction of smaller hostile targets. |
Latest revision as of 18:15, 12 December 2012
Tactical Destroyer
Fast, swift moving ship equipped with light armor and laser weapons. It is primarily used for the quick disablement and disarmament of the target.
Torp Destroyer
Fast, swift moving battleship equipped with light armor and heavy torpedoes. Used mainly for the destruction of smaller hostile targets.
Heavy Destroyer
Fast, swift moving battleship equipped with light armor and heavy artillery. Used mainly for the destruction of smaller hostile targets.
